Tuesday 19 November 2013

Sorry

Sorry guys I've been busy so I just want to say sorry for no new chapters I have made a new blog for doctor who updates stuff like that the link is here http://theonetruewhovian.blogspot.com.au/ it will open in a new tab. I will try my best to get another chapter up before this month ends. And I've been really bust with school :\. So yeah. I may add a follow my email button so you guys can just wait for a email saying that a new chapters up but I dunno. Thanks for reading bye!

Monday 28 October 2013

update

Hi guys I have finally finished my second book and I have started my third book still no name for the book :(  well I only started a while ago anyways a hope you guys enjoyed the chapter I put up today THE CYBERSHIP oh no! next chapter will be up soon thanks guys bye!.

Sunday 27 October 2013

doctor who revenge of the cybermen chapter 4

Chapter Four

The Cyber Ship


The Doctor, Donna, Taylor and Jake started walking down the street to the Tardis. Donna, Taylor and Jake were all talking but the Doctor was wondering how they could have survived the time vortex. He started to remember what had happened. The Battle of Canary Wharf, he thought to himself. He remembered Rose. A tear trickled down his cheek.

Donna: Doctor?

Doctor: (snapping out of his coma) Yes Donna ?
Donna: You are crying.

They keep walking for a few minutes longer. Finally they reach the Tardis.
The Doctor stops next to the Tardis and says: This is my space ship, the Tardis.

Taylor: How can we all fit in there ? Doctor: Oh you will see.

He winks. Jack, Donna and Taylor walk into the Tardis.

Taylor&Jake: What!!!! ITS BIGGER ON THE INSIDE

Doctor: Really? I didn't know that.
The Doctor starts walking round the Tardis console, pressing buttons and pulling levers.

Doctor: THE CYBERMEN HAVE LOCKED ONTO THE TARDIS! HOLD ON TIGHT OH AND JACK, TAYLOR - LET US GO OUT FIRST. The Tardis lands. The Doctor and Donna step out.

Doctor: Ahh, hello.

The Doctor waves.

Donna: (shouting at the cyberman) NEXT TIME YOU ATTACK US WHY DON’T YOU SAY SOMETHING AND CAN’T YOU RUN YOU GOT BEAMED UP BEFORE YOU EVEN GOT ONE OF US AND WHAT ARE YOU ANYWAY ??!!

The Doctor pulls Donna back.

Cyberman: We are Cybermen and we have a army but no leader.

Doctor: THAT’S LIKE A DALEK WITH NO COMMANDS! Why do you want Earth anyway ?

Cyberman: We need all the humans to make our great Cyber empire.

Donna: Well, why earth ?

Cyberman: Humans are the only race compatible.

Doctor: And what are the mirrors for? ( How about the humans ?

Cyberman: They have all been converted.

Doctor: Into you and what makes you better than Daleks ? You make humans scared, so do Daleks. What makes you different ?

Cyberman: We remove fear.

Another Cyberman walks up.

Cyberman: Take them away for questioning.

Cyberman 2: Ok.

The cyberman grabs Donna and the Doctor and pulls them into a door.

Jake: What's taking them so long ? Maybe we should go too.

Taylor: Good idea.
End of Chapter 4.

Wednesday 11 September 2013

doctor who revenge of the cybermen chapter 3



Chapter 3

The Man of Steel


Doctor: Run, RUN!!!
All of them start running.
Doctor: And sound the fire alarm!
Girl: Well, may as well seeing I’m going to get fired.
Donna: JUST DO IT.
Doctor: What’s your name? You didn’t tell me.
Donna: IS THIS REALLY THE TIME FOR PERSONAL QUESTIONS ?
Girl: (ignoring Donna) Taylor.
Doctor: Well Taylor, are you good at running ?
Taylor: I’m ok at it, why?
Doctor and Donna: (at the same time) RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The shadowy silver figure smashed down the door with one fist
Cyberman: You will be converted. Everyone was running out.
As soon as everyone was out the Doctor sealed the door with his sonic screwdriver.
Doctor: RUN!
The cyberman was almost at the door until a beam from the sky landed on the cyberman and it disappeared.
Doctor: There should only be a few of them, they can’t have that many.
Donna: They must be waiting for something, maybe more of them.
Doctor: That’s it - they must be sending soldiers down to get more and more people.
Taylor: That’s very simple are you sure ?
Doctor: Well, only one way to find out.
Donna: There could be millions of cyberthings up there.
Doctor: Well, three against 10 or 20 or 30 or 100, who knows ?
 The doctor smiles.
Jake: Make that four, Doctor.
Donna and Taylor look up. A 16 year old stands on the roof. He waves down.

Jake: My name’s Jake. I’m the youngest Unit soldier. I was sent to help in any way.
Doctor: Well the more the merrier!
Donna: To the Tardis then.
Jake: What’s the Tardis ?
He jumps off the roof and shakes hands with the doctor.
Jake: Nice to meet you.
Doctor:  The Tardis stands for time and relative dimension in space. Oh and this is Donna and that’s Taylor.
Donna and Taylor: Hi.
Jake: Hi. Well then, let’s go see your Tardis.

 End of chapter three.

Thursday 29 August 2013

update 1

hello everyone I  have some good news and some bad news bad news first   I haven't had any new chapters up lately it has been very busy so I haven't got the chance to put a chapter up I will try to get one up today. good news yay I have started my second doctor who book I will give you the title of it doctor who the mystery man. thanks for reading

Friday 23 August 2013

sorry

sorry guys. i did't get time to put up chapter 3 i will try to do two chapters today but i might only get one up. thanks for reading

Wednesday 21 August 2013

Chapter 2: Do Not Enter



Doctor: Ok Donna, let’s go.

Donna: Fine.

Doctor starts running and Donna follows.

Doctor: Ah, Cyber Mirrors, now let’s go.

The Doctor walks in and Donna follows.

Donna: Well this looks normal.

Doctor: I am going to the counter and stay here, Donna.

Donna: I’m not nine, you know!
Doctor: Then don’t wander off too far.

Donna: I will find my own way around thank you very much!

The doctor walks to the counter. A curly haired girl stands at the counter. She says hi.

Doctor: Hi, I was wondering why you only sell mirrors here ?

Girl: (nervously) Why not?

Doctor: Why do you sound so nervous? Girl: It’s my first day here.

She tries to smile.
Doctor: I think there is something else bothering you.

Girl: Oh no, no, I am just nervous because it’s my first day.

Doctor: (points at door that says STAFF ONLY DO NOT ENTER FINES APPLY)

Girl: Oh that’s the storage room.

The Doctor thinks she is relieved to switch subjects.

Doctor: Can I go in ?
Girl: Can’t you read?

She fake laughs and tries to smile. The Doctor starts walking towards the door.

The girl hurries after the Doctor.

Girl: Sorry sir but you can’t go in there. The Doctor holds up psychic paper.

Doctor: UNIT agent.

Girl: I am very very sorry sir but there is no way you can go in!
Doctor: Really ?

Girl: The door is locked.

Doctor: Not for much longer.

He winks and gets out his sonic screwdriver.
Girl: What’s that ?

Doctor: Sonic screwdriver.

Girl: Well, what ever that is
it won’t open that door and you’ re not the only one who wanted to go in. Another UNIT agent called Jake said he needed to get in.

Doctor: Well, nothing is going to stop me! DONNA!
Donna: No need to shout, yes?
Doctor: Come on, time to go.

He winks again.
Donna walks over. The Doctor and Donna go into the storage room.The Doctor and Donna gasp.

Donna: What is that?!
Doctor: It’s impossible!

Donna: What is it?!

Doctor: How can it be here ?

Donna: WHAT IS THAT THING THAT YOU ARE STARING AT!
Doctor: Oh yeah, right, it’s a cyberman, very very dangerous.

Girl: You are going to get me fired!

Doctor: What ever it’s doing here you need to get rid of it now!!

Girl: My boss says it is harmless.

Doctor: HARMLESS ? THAT THING COULD DESTORY THE EARTH!

Donna: Doctor, it’s moving!

End of Chapter Two

Doctor Who: Revenge of the Cybermen - Chapter One: Days of the Missing

Earth 2014, New York and a new mirror shop is open. Its only been open for a few days and it’s already famous. Hundreds of mirrors have been sold. It’s a great day for them and a sad day for New York because since the mirror shop opened hundreds are missing. The police say that it’s a coincidence but I don’t think so. My name is Jake and I’m 16 and I’m part of Unit. I’m their youngest soldier and one of their smartest. I have been training as a spy since I was 13 and I am almost done my training.

My newest mission is to visit all the missing people’s families and find out if anything happened before they went missing. They all said no but they all had a mirror, one of the new mirrors. I have one in my house. I am looking at it and I don’t see anything, all I see is myself.

(Doctor Who theme plays.)

Tardis whooshing, Tardis lands. Doctor and Donna step out.
Donna: Where have you landed us now, space man ?
Doctor: For your information this is 2014.
Donna: One year off target.
Doctor: Well does one year matter that much?
Donna: (sighs) Well what are we going to do then, go to Luna Park?
Doctor: Sure, if you want.
Donna stares at the doctor.
Donna: Really ?
Doctor: Yeah, sure, let’s go!
Donna: Who said I wanted to, and where are we anyway ?
Doctor: Well, I just thought…
Donna: You just want to go, don’t you?
Doctor: Well, they do have aeroplane roller coasters that fly!
Donna: You’re a space man, that would be boring for you.
Doctor: Well…
Donna: Well tell me where we are then.
Doctor: Hmm, looks like New York.
Donna: Oh, so you just want to go to New York to go on a rollercoaster ?
Doctor: (standing on the other side of road ) Donna, come see this!
Donna walks over.
Doctor: Look, ten missing posters on one pole!
Donna: Well that’s no surprise, they are all the same person.
Doctor: Oh.
Donna: Can’t you read ?
Doctor: I can and look over there, more missing posters and they are different.
 Donna: Well.
Donna looks around, Donna gasps. Donna: Doctor there are missing posters everywhere!!!
Doctor: (shouting at man) Don’t you dare put missing posters on my Tardis!!! I’ll have you know that is as old as you are.
Man: (sadly) Then why is is not in a museum ?
Donna: Doctor, never mind the Tardis, look!
Doctor: (sees all the missing posters, doctor gasps) Well!
Man: Can’t you read ? It’s in the newspapers, every newspaper.
Doctor: What!!!
Man: I see you don’t come from here then.
Doctor: Oh no I come from far far away.
Man: Sight seeing then ?
Doctor: Oh yeah.
Man: What’s your name anyway ?
Doctor: I’m John Smith and that’s Donna.
Man: Hi, I’m Ted. Are you from UNIT ? 
Doctor: Oh umm…
Donna looks at the doctor…
Umm yes we are.
Ted: (muttering) I don’t like UNIT.
Doctor: So Donna, found anything ?
Donna: What do you think ?
Doctor: Oh yeah.
Ted: Well, goodbye Smith, bye Donna.
Donna: Bye.
Doctor: One last thing, anything big going on ?
Ted:  Do you have amnesia?
Doctor: No, no - I mean besides the missing people.
Ted: Well, a new mirror shop has opened and its only been opened for a few days and it’s now famous. It’s called Cyber Mirrors. Take one right and head straight down and you will get there.
Doctor: Thanks, and bye!
Donna waves.





END OF CHAPTER ONE


Tuesday 20 August 2013

Hello

Hello random Whovian/Doctor Who fans. I am a Doctor Who fan. I have not earned the title of a Whovian yet. I know that sounds weird but anyway, I have been writing fan Doctor Who books for a week. Basically I found it very fun so I have decided to release it to the public now. I am going to release it chapter by chapter. There are 12 chapters.This is the first book I made so it's not the best. It is the first book I have ever written and completed so please leave positive feedback. If no one looks at my book or is mean to me  I will be stop posting Doctor Who books. Now I know trolls will just say oh this book sucks but I can tell when you are a troll,for reading. Bye!